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There are dark creatures that roam the night,
But never in the light,
Watching, waiting, for the right time ,
The victim they stalk,will get a very big shock ,
As their mouth opens wide,
two sharp  bloodstained fangs hang either side ,
As their human like figure, alive looking , but so dead inside,
digs its teeth into your skin, dragging you into its arms so tight,
and sucks the blood from within ,
you’re getting weaker, it is getting stronger,your life is getting shorter,
you close your eyes,never to see that creature again until you arise.
vampires, short but sweet.
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xXSakuraHarunoXx15 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011
Awesome just awesome! I love how you used the victim's perspective! :heart:
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Kaos2007 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Enticing :thumbsup:
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dark-gothicfox101 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2009
haha sweet, i like it C:
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:iconxwaitandbleedx-kym-x:
thankyou honey (:
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dark-gothicfox101 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2009
Your welcome :heart:
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twistedwispers Featured By Owner May 5, 2008
that is so cool
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xWaitAndBleedx-kym-x Featured By Owner May 6, 2008
hehe thanks =]
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twistedwispers Featured By Owner May 7, 2008
your welcome
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gerhardt Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
SMiles ... there is a bit of a rythm starting here...
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Jack-Off-Jill666 Featured By Owner May 18, 2007  Student Photographer
:poke:

master-piece =]
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